Wednesday, December 17, 2008


Sun is a star in the center of our solar system.
Outer planets are called gas gaints such as Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune.
Lots of enegry comes to earth and its provided from the sun.
Asteroid belt is located between the inner plantes and the outer planets.
Rocky planets are Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars.

Solar system has eight planets.
You can see the planets through a telescope.
Seasons happen because the Earth is tilted on its axis.
The Sun is a giant star.
Earth is the third planet from the Sun.
Mars is the red planet.


Mrs. Heaton's Class said...

Good job putting spaces after you comma on your second line and making sure your planets were capitalized. My favorite line is "Lots of energy comes to Earth and it's provided from the sun." A lot of people had trouble coming up with something for "L" and needed help. You did great!

Mrs. Heaton

Mrs. Heaton's Class said...

I loved how you did spaces after every comma and period. Also you did a great job with the facts in fact Ialso used Earth is the third planet from the sun.


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Mrs. Heaton's Class said...

I liked the whole poem it had so many interesting facts about the solar system.


Anonymous said...

You did a great job with the seasons and the astriod belt. I really liked reading yours. You did a good job with your comas periods.


Anonymous said...

I think that you did a good job. What did you learn Kaylynn?I like how you decribe your words and I learned that seasons happen beacause the Earth is tilted on its


Anonymous said...

Kaylynn, I thought that you did a great job describing the planets. Also, I feel like you put a lot of time into this. I also learned a lot from what you wrote.